Somehow, I inadvertently missed one Tan Renga challenge. I was going to scrap it but thought ** Kaykuala of Rainbow‘s haiku such a good one; I need to complete it with a two, seven-line completion.
Here we go, the Tan Renga…
rustling leaves dancing
light breeze brushing rosy cheeks
young hearts aflutter**
in rhythm with pounding drums
Tahitian dance performance
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Inspiration from Chevrefeuille’s Carpe Diem November Tan Renga Challenge “rustling leaves dancing.”
Style: Tan Renga, where two writers collaborate to complete a haiku with a two, seven-syllable line finish.
Glad you did not scrap it 🙂
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Celestine, i would have felt awful leaving this one out…so glad Kristjaan can fix things when
wei show up late for a challenge. 🙂 peace ~LikeLike
A perfect rhythm 🙂
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🙂 thank you, Amrit
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