tan renga, november, carpe diem

Heartbeat Rising

with light in your eyes
you embrace me in your arms
our hearts beat as one**

rising to feverish sounds
of fireworks exploding

world showcase lagoon, tan renga, heartbeat, disney world, Katie Rommel-Esham,

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Written for Chevrefeuille’s Carpe Diem November Tan Renga Challenge – “With light in your eyes”

Style: Tan Renga, a Japanese poetry form where two people collaborate to complete a haiku. Featured haiku today by **Imaginator from The Imaginator Blog followed by my two, seven-syllable line completion.

16 thoughts on “Heartbeat Rising

    • Sun says:

      ha-ha, i say, it’s good to have the Ka-Booms once in awhile…get the ol’ blood flowing? thanks for taking us higher and higher with hot haiku challenges, Kristjaan ☺


  1. Eliz@MirthandMotivation says:

    This is so beautiful… and I’m glad to have it and yours up for the Tan Renga. Would you believe that it took me a hot minute to connect you as my dear friend from Simply Charming!? You changed your name?
    TY for staying connected during my absence, I missed you too. 🙂
    Happy Thanksgiving blessings,


    • Sun says:

      sometimes its good to get away – rejuvenate the spirit. oh, sorry, yes, as you know, time so precious with blogging, decided typing three letters in my name versus eight can make a small difference time wise. plus easier to remember for most people. maybe i’ll get so time conscience and just go for the letter S. ha-ha. thanks for the blessings and have a wonderful Thanksgiving weekend yourself. ☺ cheers!


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